It
was the 2nd grade that Steven, decided to play baseball. He was so
excited for his game to ever play on the field.
It
was even better for him because, he was playing on the same team as his best
friend, Seth. They we’re the best of friends ever since they went to
kindergarten with each other.
Seth
was a lot better than Steven at baseball, but he didn’t want to show off. Seth
always helped Steven improve with his batting, throwing, and catching.
***
“Here
it is, the first game that you have ever played.” Seth said proudly to Steven.
“I
know, I am so excited to actually be part of a team.” Steven said happily.
Then
they were on the field, ready for the first game of the year.
The
games are only 4 inning because, the younger kids usually get tired after
playing for a while.
It’s
the first inning, and the Tigers, (Stevens team) are ready to take the field.
They set up a 1,2,3 inning, all with strikeouts from their pitcher at the time,
Jimmy Styles.
Now
they are up to bat, the first 3 people in the or are, 1. Seth, 2. Jimmy, 3.
Steven. And 4th. Tyler.
Seth
hit a grounder to third base, which got him out at first. Jimmy hit a pop-up to
the center fielder and, he dropped it. He got to second on an overthrow. Then
Steven was up, he was very nervous. He just swung at every pitch that passed
him. The first 2 he missed, but the third was a very hard grounder to second
and, it passed him. Jimmy got to home plate, and everyone was cheering for him.
Later that inning everyone else grounded out.
Nobody
did anything in the second inning because, the pitchers both got all
strikeouts.
It’s
the third inning, Tiger 1, Raptors 0. Seth was up first in the inning. He popped out
to right field. Jimmy hit a hard triple between the first and second basemen’s
legs. Then Steven hit a grounder to short. He got out but, still got the RBI. Than
Tyler struck out.
It’s
the top of the fourth. 1 out and 1 guy on 1st base. They could
either get the easy play at second, or the double play, which was a lot harder.
Steven was playing shortstop at the time, and he was very nervous because, he knew he was going to half to make the play.
Steven was playing shortstop at the time, and he was very nervous because, he knew he was going to half to make the play.
Then
just like that, the hitter hit the ball right to Steven, like a lightning bolt.
Steven didn’t know what to do. He just put his glove down, somehow got the ball,
ran to second, got the guy out at second, and fell over the base, threw the
ball, and it landed right in the first baseman’s glove.
They
have won. They won the game, mostly because, of Steven but, their whole team
altogether. They all tried their very hardest, which is all that matters.
Then
they all had a pool party at Jimmies house after the game, Steven said, “This
is the best day of my life!” Then coach Johnson said. “Hopefully, there is
going to be a lot more of these.” Then everyone laughed and had fun day at the
pool.
good job of sort of showing teamwork in this piece. What could be improved is not boring the reader as much and bringing some dialogue or something to make the story more interesting. Overall,I enjoyed it.
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