I predict that the 3:15 story will end end like this...
Troy will end up being a normal, shy boy, and will hardly ever talk to people. Troy will tell Molly about the jars, then Molly wont believe him, then she will ask Mr.Mason is she can look at them and she will see it too, then they both will never act the same way again. Then soon, everyone in the entire school will be hypnotized from what is inside Mr.Mason's Jars.
In this piece I think you need to add a couple more paragraphs or so describing 2 or more things why you think your prediction is accurate.
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