A couple of years ago I took a
trip to Fort Meyers, FL. I am going to talk about my trip there. Enjoy…
One morning, a couple of days
before winter break, my mom told me that we were going to Florida. I was so
excited about going because of the ocean hotel we were going to, the nice, hot
weather, and that we were going with our neighbor friends.
It
was cool because, we were right by a pool, there was a hot tub, and there was
the ocean with a beach.
It was about 11:30 when we got the
hotel. So, we pretty much just got everything un-packed, and went to sleep
because, we were all extremely exhausted.
The next morning was actually going
to be a ‘fun day.’ We first got our swimsuits on and then, started to head out
for the pool. We swam, had races, and played Marco-Polo. When we all go tired,
we decided to lay down in the hot tub. Then even after that, we all decided to
walk in the ocean. We saw crabs, fish, and even dolphins jumping way off in the
distance. When all of that was over, we all sat down and watched a movie
together.
The next morning, we all slept very
late for some reason, I think we were all still tired from the day before. So,
after we were all done sleeping, we spent the day at the beach. We made sand
castles, played games like football and tag, and we went swimming in the ocean.
During all of that, I got bored and decided to go shelling. I found a very,
very big clam that was still alive. It
was so BIG, that it couldn’t even fit in my hands. That night we did the same
as before we watched a movie.
The next morning was the final
morning at Fort Meyers. We decided to pack up early so that we could play
during the day. We went to sea world, and saw Shamu. We saw him do one last
shows on the week. It was cool how a whale that big can actually do back-flips
and things like that.
After that is was about 4:30 at
night, so we decided to go to the airport and head home.
It was such a fun weekend at Fort
Meyers with the people that I love.
You had a good beginning
ReplyDeleteI did enjoy your personal narrative. However, you just said a bunch of things about your trip and didn't describe them with details. But you did put some details in your last paragraph. I would score this in the 7 and 7.5 range.
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